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How Point of View Affects Your Story (Ep202)
Manage episode 515073281 series 2861128
How POV Affects Your Story
PATREON:
Thank you to our existing patrons for believing in our work offline and here in the podcast.
Become a patron of the arts at Patreon.com/valerieihsan for books, writing instruction, coaching, and planning. Also, the Planner Plays and Monthly Reflections are always free for all members on my Patreon page. But I don't list them as Public", so click correct tier for updated links, dates, and cancellations.
Go to Patreon.com/strangeairstories for short stories in the paranormal mystery genre.
Magic Mind Mental Performance Shot and Sleep Shot.
Up to 48% off your first subscription or 20% off one time purchases with code
VALERIE20 at checkout
You can claim it at: https://magicmind.com/VALERIE20
***
Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
- (Valerie): launching my four-month book coaching container Aligned Author TODAY. The price is drastically cut this week (it's $667 off the regular price.) Go to valerieihsan.com/alignedauthor for all the details.
- Write in the Harbor conference is coming up (2 presentations to prep for)
- feeling some feelings lately about the finality of the move and the recognition of Last Times I Will See/Do ...
- Also having some "Get over it" feelings about not showing up online. I used to show up more in pictures and words on social media and blogged (wrote a lot of personal essays), and since I've become a published author
- (Erick):
- running google ads and qualifying potential clients
- polishing stories up for omnibus edition
- Ghost Story Weekend (Newport)
- What are you reading?
- Valerie:
- Just finished: The Witch of Willow Sound
- Wild Dark Shore (Charlotte McConaghy)
- Creative Act (Rick Rubin)
- (Not ready to give up on them, but struggling to finish them:) Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman;
- Erick:
- • Summer of Night (Dan Simmons)
- My Favorite Thing is Monsters (gn)
- Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits):
- Tidbit #1:
- Tidbit #2:
Segment 3 (Main Topic):
Notes:
- POV = promise: what intimacy, information, and bias will the reader get? • 1st = interiority + voice; close 3rd = balance of interior/exterior; omniscient = scope + theme.
- The camera test: what can the narrator see/know/believe in this scene? • Ban anything they couldn't realistically perceive; use misbeliefs to create tension.
- Distance is a dial, not a switch: • Zoom in (sensory, thought-beat, micro-movements) for emotion; zoom out (summary, context) for pace/theme.
- POV shifts = scene breaks + reason: • Change only to add net new conflict, clue, or consequence. Track continuity of diction and metaphor.
- Try this: rewrite a 200-word scene in 1st, close 3rd, and omniscient. • Ask: which version delivers the most tension, clarity, and theme resonance?
And don't forget:
Go to valerieihsan.com to schedule a free consultation to see if Aligned Author is right for you.
Get 48% off the Magic Mind :
https://magicmind.com/VALERIE20 and use Valerie20 at checkout.
#magicmind #mentalwealth #mentalperformance
Find Us:
Valerie's Linktree: https://linktr.ee/valerieihsan (Find Passion Planner discount codes here.)
Erick's Linktree link: https://linktr.ee/erickmertzauthor
Patreons:
https://patreon.com/valerieihsan
https://patreon.com/strangeairmysteries
Tools:
ProWriting Aid: https://prowritingaid.com/?afid=9378 (affiliate link)
204 episodes
Manage episode 515073281 series 2861128
How POV Affects Your Story
PATREON:
Thank you to our existing patrons for believing in our work offline and here in the podcast.
Become a patron of the arts at Patreon.com/valerieihsan for books, writing instruction, coaching, and planning. Also, the Planner Plays and Monthly Reflections are always free for all members on my Patreon page. But I don't list them as Public", so click correct tier for updated links, dates, and cancellations.
Go to Patreon.com/strangeairstories for short stories in the paranormal mystery genre.
Magic Mind Mental Performance Shot and Sleep Shot.
Up to 48% off your first subscription or 20% off one time purchases with code
VALERIE20 at checkout
You can claim it at: https://magicmind.com/VALERIE20
***
Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
- (Valerie): launching my four-month book coaching container Aligned Author TODAY. The price is drastically cut this week (it's $667 off the regular price.) Go to valerieihsan.com/alignedauthor for all the details.
- Write in the Harbor conference is coming up (2 presentations to prep for)
- feeling some feelings lately about the finality of the move and the recognition of Last Times I Will See/Do ...
- Also having some "Get over it" feelings about not showing up online. I used to show up more in pictures and words on social media and blogged (wrote a lot of personal essays), and since I've become a published author
- (Erick):
- running google ads and qualifying potential clients
- polishing stories up for omnibus edition
- Ghost Story Weekend (Newport)
- What are you reading?
- Valerie:
- Just finished: The Witch of Willow Sound
- Wild Dark Shore (Charlotte McConaghy)
- Creative Act (Rick Rubin)
- (Not ready to give up on them, but struggling to finish them:) Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman;
- Erick:
- • Summer of Night (Dan Simmons)
- My Favorite Thing is Monsters (gn)
- Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits):
- Tidbit #1:
- Tidbit #2:
Segment 3 (Main Topic):
Notes:
- POV = promise: what intimacy, information, and bias will the reader get? • 1st = interiority + voice; close 3rd = balance of interior/exterior; omniscient = scope + theme.
- The camera test: what can the narrator see/know/believe in this scene? • Ban anything they couldn't realistically perceive; use misbeliefs to create tension.
- Distance is a dial, not a switch: • Zoom in (sensory, thought-beat, micro-movements) for emotion; zoom out (summary, context) for pace/theme.
- POV shifts = scene breaks + reason: • Change only to add net new conflict, clue, or consequence. Track continuity of diction and metaphor.
- Try this: rewrite a 200-word scene in 1st, close 3rd, and omniscient. • Ask: which version delivers the most tension, clarity, and theme resonance?
And don't forget:
Go to valerieihsan.com to schedule a free consultation to see if Aligned Author is right for you.
Get 48% off the Magic Mind :
https://magicmind.com/VALERIE20 and use Valerie20 at checkout.
#magicmind #mentalwealth #mentalperformance
Find Us:
Valerie's Linktree: https://linktr.ee/valerieihsan (Find Passion Planner discount codes here.)
Erick's Linktree link: https://linktr.ee/erickmertzauthor
Patreons:
https://patreon.com/valerieihsan
https://patreon.com/strangeairmysteries
Tools:
ProWriting Aid: https://prowritingaid.com/?afid=9378 (affiliate link)
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