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619: Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 3): How Reflection Leads to Insight with Alisha, HS Senior
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Hey friends, and welcome back to the College Essay Guy podcast. Today's episode is the third and final episode in our series called Inside the Personal Statement Process. If you're just tuning in, this series takes you behind the scenes as I work one-on-one with Alisha, a current high school senior applying for the Fall 2026 term. Find Part 1 here and Part 2 here.
This episode was recorded just a few days before Alisha submitted her early applications. The focus of this episode is on one of the most challenging—and perhaps, the least discussed—aspect of writing the personal statement: insight.
In the session, Alisha and I explore:
- What is insight?
- How do you find good insights?
- What are the kinds of questions that can lead to insights?
- And more
Whether you're a student working on your own essays right now, a parent supporting from the sidelines, or a counselor guiding students through this process, I hope you'll find something useful here.
Alisha is a current high school senior going through the application process who loves science, movies, and discovering new places. When she's not studying the brain, she's mentoring younger students through her program Running Start or planning her next adventure.
Hope you enjoy our session.
Play-by-Play:
- 1:16 – It's just days before her Early Decision deadline. How's Alisha feeling?
- 2:21 – What is "insight," and why does it matter in an essay?
- 3:30 – Alisha begins reading her latest draft, Wherever the Road Takes Us
- 4:08 – Ethan gives his thoughts on Alisha's intro
- 5:37 – Paragraph one: Curiosity
- 11:04 – Paragraph two: Creativity
- 11:52 – How does art make Alisha a better scientist?
- 14:20 – Paragraph three: Empathy
- 21:20 – Alisha uses the Values Exercise to identify potential new insights
- 28:19 – Paragraph four: Community
- 32:47 – Paragraph five: Conclusion and the "empty jar."
- 35:53 – Ethan recaps final notes and next steps
- 39:50 – Alisha and Ethan reflects on the writing process and Alisha's growth
- 41:34 – Closing thoughts
Resources:
- Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 1): The Sand Essay with Alisha, HS Senior
- Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 2): Discovering Values Through Revision with Alisha, HS Senior
- The Values Exercise
- College Essay Guy's Personal Statement Resources
- College Essay Guy's College Application Hub
98 episodes
619: Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 3): How Reflection Leads to Insight with Alisha, HS Senior
The College Essay Guy Podcast: A Practical Guide to College Admissions
Manage episode 518017287 series 2091325
Hey friends, and welcome back to the College Essay Guy podcast. Today's episode is the third and final episode in our series called Inside the Personal Statement Process. If you're just tuning in, this series takes you behind the scenes as I work one-on-one with Alisha, a current high school senior applying for the Fall 2026 term. Find Part 1 here and Part 2 here.
This episode was recorded just a few days before Alisha submitted her early applications. The focus of this episode is on one of the most challenging—and perhaps, the least discussed—aspect of writing the personal statement: insight.
In the session, Alisha and I explore:
- What is insight?
- How do you find good insights?
- What are the kinds of questions that can lead to insights?
- And more
Whether you're a student working on your own essays right now, a parent supporting from the sidelines, or a counselor guiding students through this process, I hope you'll find something useful here.
Alisha is a current high school senior going through the application process who loves science, movies, and discovering new places. When she's not studying the brain, she's mentoring younger students through her program Running Start or planning her next adventure.
Hope you enjoy our session.
Play-by-Play:
- 1:16 – It's just days before her Early Decision deadline. How's Alisha feeling?
- 2:21 – What is "insight," and why does it matter in an essay?
- 3:30 – Alisha begins reading her latest draft, Wherever the Road Takes Us
- 4:08 – Ethan gives his thoughts on Alisha's intro
- 5:37 – Paragraph one: Curiosity
- 11:04 – Paragraph two: Creativity
- 11:52 – How does art make Alisha a better scientist?
- 14:20 – Paragraph three: Empathy
- 21:20 – Alisha uses the Values Exercise to identify potential new insights
- 28:19 – Paragraph four: Community
- 32:47 – Paragraph five: Conclusion and the "empty jar."
- 35:53 – Ethan recaps final notes and next steps
- 39:50 – Alisha and Ethan reflects on the writing process and Alisha's growth
- 41:34 – Closing thoughts
Resources:
- Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 1): The Sand Essay with Alisha, HS Senior
- Inside the Personal Statement Process (Part 2): Discovering Values Through Revision with Alisha, HS Senior
- The Values Exercise
- College Essay Guy's Personal Statement Resources
- College Essay Guy's College Application Hub
98 episodes
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